When my story was workshopped I was the first one on that day so I was a bit worried about what was going to happen in the class discussion. With my story I had concerns about the narrator being too ambiguous and that the unknown may be a bad thing in the story. I was also worried about the goriness and the description of decomposition may be too much for the reader. It was good to hear that these things were taken well by most people and I was kinda worrying for nothing. The grossness came off well and went with the story to make the main characters development better. For the next stages of my story I may edit it to be a bit more detailed to foreshadow Zetra’s relation to “Master” and to also show her some more humanity. I would also like to revamp the ending to make it feel less rushed. I want to write more for this story but depends on what comes to me in the next couple weeks and if I like my second idea more than this one. I may fix this story up just for myself, even if I don’t share it with anyone else.